November 2nd, 2016, 7:09 pm
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SuperScratchkat November 2nd, 2016, 7:16 pm
REN FOUL OR SOMEBODY SOMEHOW MISSED THE YELLOW KIRBY THING OKay so the dank meme is that ulti ended up killing off both the yellow kirbies in his comic (if there were more they must have been some really boring yellow kirbies) and the nashew did that too and now its a funny for a yellow kirby to die horribly, probably by getting stabbed

SO NATURALLY I WAS GONNA HAVE A PLANET WHERE YELLOW KIRBIES GET SLAUGHTERED BY THE THOUSANDS and it was gonna be like, bad dark humor but probably less funny

aaaaanyways i used shotophop to make these, they're a bit more indicative of what the actual comic might look like

also dedede's still a massive cactus up my butt, getting better at him though
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Ultizeta November 2nd, 2016, 7:31 pm
mmm delicious

You should try giving Dedede more weight. His body is a bit lanky the way it is right now, try starting his body off with a large circle and shorten the arms a bit.

It might be a nice visual touch as well to have Bandana Dee's bandana have a bit of a bulge around the edges as opposed to just being straight and tight around his forehead. Maybe even make it a bit wider than his actual head would be.

unless you really dont care about critique on generic doodles in which case ignore me
SuperScratchkat November 3rd, 2016, 9:56 am
@Ultizeta: nah dude i appreciate the feedback
art is arguably more than half the battle in a drawn comic so i appreciate critique

i was actually looking at dee when i made this wondering about how i could make his bandanna more interesting, i considered adding a star like they did when they made kirby's return to dreamland and decided that the fighter hat was just too boring, but i didnt waaaaaaanna add a star so thanks for the idea ill play with that (and ill play with dedede's bad eating habits too)
Warpstar November 2nd, 2016, 7:53 pm
Kirby, grap your eyebrows before they leve you head! You too, Dee.

Wait, you guys have eyebrows now?

Honestly, you guys need to go to school and learn punctuation and capizzzzilation ans spelling!
Nashew November 2nd, 2016, 8:24 pm
@Warpstar: i think u need 2 realize that ur on the internet where people constantly dont spell things right because they don't need to
SuperScratchkat November 3rd, 2016, 9:57 am
@Warpstar: im replacing the adventures of squished waddle dee and his pet bird with the wacky adventures of kirby and his gradually raising eyebrows
Therater2 November 3rd, 2016, 7:05 am
isn't the yellow Kirby thing more of an in-joke at this point than a dank meme

sorry to spoil this guys
SuperScratchkat November 3rd, 2016, 9:53 am
KirbyFighterDeluxe November 18th, 2016, 1:14 am
tbh better than anything i've drawn so far
TheJGamer April 7th, 2017, 4:42 pm
there now we have high quality 4k sketches

i am appeased